Jitterbug Perfume, Week 2, Daffy Yum

JITTERBUG PERFUME
WEEK 2


Jitterbug Perfume, Page 8

carolfly@yahoo.com" carolfly@yahoo.com wrote:

“She plopped down her pumpkin patch, her Spanish ballroom, her pagan idol of a body on a lime velvet loveseat." - JP p.8

Oh, I cannot get over this description. Got me wondering how I might describe other people or myself.

Since I'm feeling skinny today I'll go with:
She set down her Tootsie Pop, her psych ward, her toy soldier of a body...

Man, this writing thing is even harder than it looks. Anybody want to share?

- Carol
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Lynn Cantrell wrote:

what? and who are you?

carolfly@yahoo.com" carolfly@yahoo.com wrote:

Wait a minute... I thought that was my question...
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Deena B. Omar wrote:

I love the character intros, imagery and general vibe in this bit, but above all it's the lime velvet love seat, that gets me every time...
Deena
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carolfly@yahoo.com" carolfly@yahoo.com wrote:

It's funny -- I hadn't seen your post when I sent mine. We seem to like two halves of the same image. I like the butt, you like the couch!

- Carol

Deena B. Omar wrote:

a satisfying symmetry there in our likes, Carol...the butt and the couch; sounds like two more characters in another TR story...

Deena
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